Now, before I begin I need to say something: I am well aware and know that the synopsis is thin. I know it is far from perfect. What I want is to know how to thicken it up. These are JUST the major events. Please help me make this interesting.
After having a run in with soldiers, the half dragon sorceress, CARAKA, is rescued by a mysterious half dragon archer named KYTHERAN, who seems to be traveling with the sorceress's old friend, CIPHER. After quickly revealing her abilities, and Kytheran having an adverse reaction to her magic infused weapons, the relationship between Caraka and Kytheran's childhood friend and elfin lancer, AARALYNN, quickly sours. Soceresses are not trusted by the general populace, especially ones of the half dragon variety.
While traveling to a dead city, Caraka is separated by the group and is attacked by a sea monster she knows personally and fears he will reveal her to her enemies. She gets rescued by the rest of the group and they continue on to the dead city where they meet an Immortal who explains their new journey; to find the missing Gods and put a stop to the powerful Lich Lord from resetting the world.
Meanwhile, the Lich Lord, TAMESIS, knows exactly what the group is doing and sends out his second-in-command, JOAQUIN, ahead to their next destination. He fears they will reawaken his old ally and traitor, TANIS.
Nearly captured by soldiers outside of the dead city, Caraka shows her hand and reveals one of her most powerful spells; she can puts people into a trance and make their nightmares become real. This deeply frightens Kytheran and Aaralynn, despite the sorceress's assurances of complete control.
In the city where Tanis lays, they are discovered and attacked by a Fallen Immortal, one of Tamesis' powerful minions. One of Caraka's spells accidentally sends Kytheran into a trance and evoke memories of conversations he never had. Confused and dazed, he tries to push the memories from his mind.
Ambushed and attacked by creatures of the dark, the group finally finds the frozen dragon, Tanis. Quickly separating, Caraka and Kytheran go off to destroy a magical seal while Cipher and Aaralynn reawaken the slumbering dragon.
While searching for the seal, the sorceress and archer come face to face with the Fallen Immortal. After he explains while deep hatred for the Gods, he sends the seal to attack them. Barely succeeding in the seal's destruction, the pair return to their friends, only to find them under attack by a dark creature. Getting into combat with Joaquin, the group barely escape the city with their lives.
After recuperating, the group travels to their next destination but they have to by pass Caraka's home village. Terrified of reaping the repercussions of running away years earlier, she protests but they simply fall on deaf ears.
The town has their own problems; they haven't heard from the local Mage guild in months and have grown concerned. Stuck between two waring kingdoms, the town fears one of the armies took over the guild to steal the town's precious resource, magic crystals. Taking on the task, Cipher, Aaralynn, Tanis, and a local head off to the tower where the guild lives.
Once they get there, they quickly discover the place is taken over by Tamesis' minions. Ambushed and taken off guard, Cipher is knocked unconscious and Tanis is driven mad by a mysterious overabundance of magic. Afraid and alone, Aaralynn left is trapped between a crazed dragon and an encroaching band of dark creatures.
Meanwhile, back in town, Caraka is attacked by Joaquin, her own brother. She tries to escape but falls victim to his special ability; he can control anyone's mind. He takes her, and along with another Fallen, casts a spell over the unsuspecting town.
Afterwards, Kytheran wakes to a mysterious, empty town and is quickly attacked by a strange, mutated wolf. After failing to escape, he is captured by the crazed and tainted Caraka and transported to a dreamworld filled with his darkest memories. Saved by a mysterious light, he reawakens to face a new enemy-- the oversized teddy bear. A quick battle ensues and Caraka returns and takes a more direct attack of Kytheran. He immobilizes her with newfound magic and she temporarily reverts to normal and extracts the Fallen's soul, killing her. The sorceress collapses and falls unconscious. While trying to aid her, Joaquin returns to give Kytheran a warning; the Rebirth will be coming.Now you know what happens in my book!