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Karolina
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I'm open-minded for all the new ideas, but second person really sucks.
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Quote from: Karolina on February 14, 2012, 02:53:14 AM
I'm open-minded for all the new ideas, but second person really sucks.
All kidding aside, I've seen it done really well.
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Quote from: Tabris on February 14, 2012, 05:40:48 AM
All kidding aside, I've seen it done really well.
Me too. Some French writer combined second and third person, plus mixing present and past tenses, and the book was fabulous.
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I've seen present tense used very well in asides or when the characters are in a different state of mind. I see all these things as tools to go places we want to go and to get across how our characters perceive the world and their conflicts.
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