Thanks for the fantastic link.
Marva, I think maybe the problem with your logline is that it doesn't show what opposes the main character--going strictly by my reading. I'm not any good at them either.
Ok, finding her lover is her goal? But what or who is keeping her from doing that?
Here is a try for a logline for the novel I've been querying.
When a novice mercenary saves the princess she is guarding from an attack by an ambitious nobelman, she must struggle to restore the princes to her throne and save the honor of her own clan.
Hmmmm not very good. Harder than they make it look.
Is the novice mercenary female? If so, maybe name the mercenary to keep who's doing what straight.
When Violet, a novice mercenary, saves her charge, Princess Daisy from an attack by an ambitious nobleman (who wants her dead?), Violet must...
Sorry, I'm lousy at it. Sounds like a real swashbuckler...or is that only for pirates?