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Author Topic: Tabris!!!! Republishing!!!  (Read 1232 times)
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« Reply #30 on: June 01, 2012, 02:55:30 PM »

Tabris, since you mention a title, I wanted to say the thing I liked best about your query was that the angel/guardian was slowly going dark because he wasn't accepting the grace/forgiveness given to him. I love that concept. So, I'd suggest playing with that for the title.
Accepting Mercy
Finding Grace
Second-chance Angel (meh, this comes off as "romance-y")
Growing Dark (sounds horror-y?)
Forever Falling
Falling Angel ("ing" vs. "en")
Own Worst Enemy

Bah, I'm bad at this.
Dark Fall.

Sorry, I wanted to play, too.
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« Reply #31 on: June 01, 2012, 03:17:18 PM »

Dark Fall is great LTTP.

What about "Shadow of Guilt" ..a play on shadow of doubt, and "Guardian's Shadow" that Tabris mentioned.

I know there is a separate section for title brainstorming. Sorry for the derail from your celebration post, T. <slaps own wrist>
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« Reply #32 on: June 01, 2012, 03:45:15 PM »

What about "Shadow of Guilt" ..a play on shadow of doubt, and "Guardian's Shadow" that Tabris mentioned.

I know there is a separate section for title brainstorming. Sorry for the derail from your celebration post, T. <slaps own wrist> You know if you keep doing that people will look at you funny. Believe me, I know.   crazy
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« Reply #33 on: June 01, 2012, 04:57:58 PM »

Thank you, guys. I have two sheets of paper with titles we rejected for this book. It just doesn't want to be titled. :-b
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« Reply #34 on: June 02, 2012, 02:40:14 PM »

Sweeeeet! clap 
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« Reply #35 on: June 03, 2012, 02:34:33 PM »

Congratulations, Tabris.   clap clap clap clap
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