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[raballard]

which of these poems do you prefer? One or two.

May Your #1

MAY YOUR

May your life be full of sunshine, even when your skies are gray.
May you find the strength to go on when you think you've lost your way.
May the smiles you get from others be the warm fulfilling kind.
May your dreams that you are dreaming be easier to find.
When you look into your past may you look without regret
of people, places or things you would be better to forget.
May you find your happiness as you pass on through the years.
But remember you receive wisdom when lessons are learned from your tears.
May the love you find in your life be the kind you know will last,
the kind of love that will free your heart from all of your pain of the past.
When it becomes time to look into that final bright light,
may you look secure in the knowledge you have loved and loved right.


May Your #2

MAY YOUR

May your life be full of sunshine even when your skies are gray.
May you find the strength to go on when you think you've lost your way.
May the smiles you get from others be the warm fulfilling kind.
May any dreams you might be dreaming be easier to find.
May you look into your life and look without any regret,
May your life be void of actions you‘d be better to forget.
May you always remember wisdom can be learned from your tears.
May the love you find in your life be the kind you know will last.
May that love free your heart from any pain you’ve had in your past.
May you hold your head high as you walk towards life’s final light,
May you look secure in the knowledge you have loved and loved right.

[raballard]

of course you may always use the niether app.

[lexcade]

I'd have to go with #1. The variation is nice.

[AshK]

Depends. What market are they for?

[Mere Joyce]

I think I liked the flow of the lines a bit better in #1, but I enjoyed that every line began the same way in #2...so if I had to pick one of them, I'd probably pick #2