Hi, I'm working on my next WIP and have been hammering over this beginning for weeks - but I'm not sure it works.
I'd really appreciate any comments (even bad ones
If Meg could choose any place in the world to be, she most likely would have picked the library. Most of the time you could find her with her nose stuck between the pages of a fantastical story about dragons, heroic knights and magic – lots of magic. Or maybe, just maybe, she would have chosen to be sitting in a corner booth at the Italian restaurant on Third Street in the small town of Morrill, Nebraska. The restaurant served a mountain of spaghetti with fresh baked bread, and, most importantly, a maraschino cherry in the lemon soda. But whatever place Meg would have chosen to be, it most definitely, to a thousand million billion percent certainty, wouldn’t have been Nana’s living room.