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Author Topic: The Death of Me (one millionth query revision) YA Paranormal  (Read 540 times)
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« Reply #15 on: August 13, 2012, 10:03:57 AM »

Hi River,

When you respond to a message, there is a little blue link at the top of the post you'd like to respond to that says "Insert Quote". It will insert the blue box for you and you can edit that way.

Here is a final version of the query that was "checked off" by my editor:


Katie has thirty days to accomplish everything she’s ever wanted to do. Before she dies. Again. 

After a fatal car accident, sixteen-year-old Katie discovers that just like high school, the afterlife is one big popularity contest. Yet again she’s left out of the equation because everybody else has achieved some kind of “life goal” and moved on to a higher plane. But Katie hasn’t, so she’s given thirty more days to get it right. At least she’s got adorable afterlifer Martin to help her with—or distract her from—her Life List.

But when an evil Irish wraith promises Katie’s parents will suffer after her death, her task of living fast and hard becomes entangled with a terrible choice: save her parents and end up as the next hot item on the alter-dimensional black market, or save her own soul. Time is running out...

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« Reply #16 on: August 13, 2012, 01:29:16 PM »

Hi River,

When you respond to a message, there is a little blue link at the top of the post you'd like to respond to that says "Insert Quote". It will insert the blue box for you and you can edit that way.

Here is a final version of the query that was "checked off" by my editor:


Katie has thirty days to accomplish everything she’s ever wanted to do. Before she dies. Again. 

After a fatal car accident, sixteen-year-old Katie discovers that just like high school, the afterlife is one big popularity contest. Yet again she’s left out of the equation because everybody else has achieved some kind of “life goal” and moved on to a higher plane. But Katie hasn’t, so she’s given thirty more days to get it right. At least she’s got adorable afterlifer Martin to help her with—or distract her from—her Life List.

But when an evil Irish wraith promises Katie’s parents will suffer after her death, her task of living fast and hard becomes entangled with a terrible choice: save her parents and end up as the next hot item on the alter-dimensional black market, or save her own soul. Time is running out...


Thank you! I want to copy this and work on it and get back with you later in the day. Still don't get how to put the lines in there...
« Last Edit: August 13, 2012, 01:31:53 PM by River » Logged

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