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Jackskellington
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« on: January 02, 2018, 09:03:04 PM »

The first book:   Serious Seymour and the Bureau of Silly Ideas (my favorite - but too long?)
                         Seymour and the Bureau of Silly Ideas (2nd favorite)
                         Seriously Silly Seymour
                         Serious Seymour Gets Silly

                        
(Initially, the title was Bert and the Bureau of Silly ideas - which I think had a nice ring to it - but I had to ditch that because I changed the name to Seymour so he could have nickname, Serious Seymour).

Pitch: “Serious Seymour”, as his schoolmates call him, scoffs at anything silly. But when he breaks the rules and sneaks away at a magical bureau where silly ideas spring to life, he must embrace his inner silly to evade the cupcake-cooking crocodiles, disco-dancing dragons, and pillow-fighting pirates he’s upset along the way.

SEYMOUR AND THE BUREAU OF SILLY IDEAS is a humorous, 500-word picture book with a twist at the end. It is intended for 4-8 year-olds.



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« Reply #1 on: January 03, 2018, 08:28:18 AM »

I don't necessarily think the first one is too long. If it's your fav, then go for it. Chances are your agent or editor will want to change the title anyway.
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« Reply #2 on: January 03, 2018, 08:53:18 AM »

Thanks for the response!
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« Reply #3 on: January 03, 2018, 02:02:06 PM »

I like the first one, too. clap
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« Reply #4 on: January 03, 2018, 02:40:55 PM »

Thank you! That's the title I'm going with.   Thumbs Up
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« Reply #5 on: January 18, 2018, 06:48:10 AM »

Numero uno  Smiley
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« Reply #6 on: January 18, 2018, 06:52:51 AM »

I'm with the band - number one is the cutest.
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« Reply #7 on: January 19, 2018, 08:52:51 AM »

Thanks! That's the name I went with.  Grin
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