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« on: November 03, 2009, 04:38:06 PM »

I have a question.  If my characters are having a meal in a restaurant, can my character say, "I'll have a Coke." or should I stick with "I'll have a cola."?
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« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2009, 05:08:34 PM »

Name the product and let the publisher deal with it if it's a problem.  Have the characters say what sounds natural.
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« Reply #2 on: November 03, 2009, 05:56:55 PM »

I agree w/ ML.

My MC likes Diet Pepsi...and it's in there until someone asks for it's removal  Grin
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« Reply #3 on: November 03, 2009, 06:04:07 PM »

OMG! I'm the goddess of product name dropping! I've tossed in : Sweet & Low, Comet, Bennigans, Whole Foods, Diet Coke, Taster's Choice - to name a few. We all live on the same planet - most of the time - so I think readers like being able to relate to similar likes or dislikes.
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« Reply #4 on: November 03, 2009, 06:18:15 PM »

Certain names are trademarked, but in a novel it will fall under fair use. Kleenex and Xerox are trademarked names that the courts have ruled can be used without trademarks, though (as in, "Hand me a kleenex, will ya?")
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« Reply #5 on: November 03, 2009, 06:23:07 PM »

Certain names are trademarked, but in a novel it will fall under fair use. Kleenex and Xerox are trademarked names that the courts have ruled can be used without trademarks, though (as in, "Hand me a kleenex, will ya?")

So specific names that have become generic in usage, Jell-O instead of gelatin, probably all fall under the Kleenex ruling?
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« Reply #6 on: November 03, 2009, 06:34:21 PM »

In the interests of versimilitude and familiarity, I used a ton of them, everything from Victor mousetraps to Wild Turkey 101 to Jessica McClintock No. 3.  Smiley


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« Reply #7 on: November 03, 2009, 06:47:26 PM »

Where does Mad Dog 2020 fall???



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« Reply #8 on: November 03, 2009, 07:14:19 PM »

Where does Mad Dog 2020 fall???

I guess wherever he dropped it when he passed out.  Grin
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« Reply #9 on: November 03, 2009, 09:59:22 PM »

OMG! I'm the goddess of product name dropping! I've tossed in : Sweet & Low, Comet, Bennigans, Whole Foods, Diet Coke, Taster's Choice - to name a few. We all live on the same planet - most of the time - so I think readers like being able to relate to similar likes or dislikes.

Hmmmm, let's see . . . Semtex, Dragunov SVD, Browning Hi-Power, Baretta, Parker-Hale, Remington 700, Galil, Heckler & Kock MP-50, Glock, Smith & Wesson . . .

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« Reply #10 on: November 03, 2009, 11:48:18 PM »

Hmmmm, let's see . . . Semtex, Dragunov SVD, Browning Hi-Power, Beretta, Parker-Hale, Remington 700, Galil, Heckler & Kock MP-50, Glock, Smith & Wesson . .

Wow, you've got me outgunned, for sure. All I had was a Colt Python, a Walther THP .25 ACP, and a Ruger Super Redhawk .454 Casull.   Quick Draw


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« Reply #11 on: November 04, 2009, 04:39:43 AM »

OMG! I'm the goddess of product name dropping! I've tossed in : Sweet & Low, Comet, Bennigans, Whole Foods, Diet Coke, Taster's Choice - to name a few. We all live on the same planet - most of the time - so I think readers like being able to relate to similar likes or dislikes.

Hmmmm, let's see . . . Semtex, Dragunov SVD, Browning Hi-Power, Baretta, Parker-Hale, Remington 700, Galil, Heckler & Kock MP-50, Glock, Smith & Wesson . . .

Dan

Here's my "It's 3:30 in the morning bad joke"... Luctari is shooting his mouth off again.   Grin

NOTE - This joke may not be as funny after a few hours of sleep.
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« Reply #12 on: November 04, 2009, 05:38:42 AM »

No.............................It holds up!   Quick Draw
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« Reply #13 on: November 04, 2009, 06:40:18 AM »

No.............................It holds up!   Quick Draw

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« Reply #14 on: November 04, 2009, 08:06:06 AM »

So many people around here can shoot from the hip!  Quick Draw

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