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Title: THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
Post by: Zooks on July 29, 2019, 04:27:17 PM
Any help would be appreciated.

When tragedy leaves top model Gertie von Hegstrom disfigured, she fears her life and career are over and any future romances are out of the question until she realizes Ollie has always loved her and accepts her as is.
Title: Re: THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
Post by: jcwrites on July 29, 2019, 05:26:50 PM
Just some tinkering (and a bit of license with "accident"):

When a freak motorcycle accident leaves top model Gertie von Hegstrom disfigured, she figures her career is kaput and her love life is history—until she realizes Ollie adores her no matter what.
Title: Re: THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
Post by: Zooks on July 30, 2019, 09:11:27 AM
Thanks, jcwrites. I like your spin on it.
Title: Re: THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
Post by: jcwrites on July 30, 2019, 12:23:36 PM
Thanks, I—yikes!... Just noticed that "disfigured... figures" echo. Sorry!
Title: Re: THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
Post by: Zooks on July 30, 2019, 06:10:11 PM
*That's* ok, jcwrites. I noticed and changed 'figures' to 'believes'.  :wink: