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Writing => Critique Group Central => Topic started by: brandileigh2003 on March 31, 2011, 02:22:38 PM

Title: YA Contemporary Critique Wanted
Post by: brandileigh2003 on March 31, 2011, 02:22:38 PM
I need an extra eye for places where I'm telling instead of showing, cliches, and places where characters sound too old. I've gotten reader's feedback as well as 3 chap critique from a pubbed author.
I'd be happy to swap ms. I read YA contemp and paranormal.
Respond here or email brandileigh2003@yahoo.com


Meredith has learned the rules for survival: never be late, call home secretly, and above all, keep Kaden happy. Because when when Kaden is happy, he transforms into the boy she fell in love with.