I've written a YA fantasy written in first person, alternating narration and am interested to find out what others think of my first two chapters, particularly because the first one is, for now, technically being called a prologue. All I'll say, to not give anything away, is it takes place before the rest of the book and is written in a different style than the rest, so I want to know how the two work together.
Anyway, I'd be willing to read someone else's in return, especially if it's YA fantasy/action/adventure etc. as that's what I read and write, so that's what I'm best at. I'm pretty good with grammar/punctuation/sentence structure, but I'll also comment on character/intro/plot logic and any personal requests.
Disclaimer: I won't be willing to read anything exessively dark, gory, or would be found in the rated mature section of your library. And I wouldn't recommend handing me a vampire-based novel, for everybody's sanity
Thanks!
