I'm just about ready to have someone (or a few someones) ready through my rewrites. It will likely be a chapter-by-chapter thing as I go. I'm willing to swap with someone, but I'd prefer to do so outside my own genre, if possible.
What I'll be looking for:
*First impressions of the piece: how it comes across, how a reader feels it ties into what comes before and after.
*Suggestions for improvement.
*Emotional impact.
What I can offer:
*Grammatical help (with occasional errors).
*General impressions.
*Suggestions for improvement.
*Evaluating what works and what doesn't.
Anyone interested, let me know!