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Offline tangelb

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seeking beta for early chapter book
« on: January 09, 2013, 02:55:00 PM »
I posted my first five for "Trouble With the Weeds".  It's 4000 words and I would greatly appreciate a critique partner!
Thanks!

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Re: seeking beta for early chapter book
« Reply #1 on: January 09, 2013, 04:30:57 PM »
Hi! I sent you a Pen Pal request on the main site. What is your story about?

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Re: seeking beta for early chapter book
« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2013, 05:26:13 PM »
It's about personified flowers, Daisy and Rose, who are blooming for the first time.  They are best friends growing up in a garden.  Rose is insecure and wants to be liked.  She tries to fit in with the Weeds who are the delinquents.  Daisy is a loyal friend who saves Rose from wilting in the Weed patch.