Hi, we're a twin writing duo currently looking for a critique partner. The first five pages are posted on the first five thread under INCANTI, if you want to take a look and think it might be up your alley. Basically, we're looking for another set of eyes to make sure our world is not confusing. So if you're interested, we'd be happy to swap our first three chapters with yours. I've been in a critique group once before, so I can probably give some good feedback.
Thanks guys!
