Author Topic: Beta Reader for upper MG/lower YA Fantasy  (Read 1435 times)

Offline sara_ash

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Beta Reader for upper MG/lower YA Fantasy
« on: January 08, 2014, 08:53:32 PM »
Hi everyone!

I'm looking for a beta reader for my MG Fantasy, THE LAST TIMEMAKER AND THE STOLEN SUN. I don't need anything in depth (nothing like a line-by-line), just someone to point out what works for them and what doesn't. It's fairly short (58,000) and leans towards the upper MG and lower YA market (the opening two chapters are a lot closer to MG, but the later chapters shift closer to YA (something I need to work on)). Here's a brief hook/summary:

Trapped in a world without children, a boy from Earth must solve a fifty-year-old mystery in return for a ticket home.

I'd be happy to Beta read for you in return!

Offline quiarahb

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Re: Beta Reader for upper MG/lower YA Fantasy
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2014, 12:19:32 PM »
Hi Sara.

I would love to be your CP. I love your story and would like to help you with it if you still need it. I really need a CP as well. I'm struggling a bit with mine and would like some feedback. Let me know if you're still interested.