I'm almost finished with my latest project, a romance novel set in the tropics. I have 5 other readers but so far, they only tell me how much they love it and won't give me anything to improve on. My goal is to be finished by June 6 so I can send it off to my editor. (Yes, it is unedited so you'll have to overlook the mistakes) I like to get the feedback before I'm finished so that I know I'm really headed where I want to be. Any takers?
PLEASE, I need a critical eye, not just an average reader's point of view. As I've pondered my dilemma, I realized I should have come here in the first place. Help?
Language, sensuality, brief and hopefully tactful sexuality--is that an oxymoron?
