I'm working on a romance series. First one is out and getting good reviews but as I work on part 2 and 3, my editor mentioned she forgot one of my characters is supposed to be British.
So I've beefed up her dialogue in the upcoming parts. I wanted more than to just throw in a bunch of the cliche "bloody's" and I did a lot of research, looking for words to use. I hope I pulled it off but if any of our British QueryTracker friends should happen to run across my book (s), I'd greatly appreciate some feedback before I self-publish the other 2. (Wet Part 1 by S. Jackson Rivera) Part 2 out by end of May, first of June.
If you are really dedicated to help me with this, I'd be willing to send an ARC of part 2 and 3 to get some feedback before it's too late. (Part 1 is kind of a done deal)
