I got feedback from one agent, who passed, "albeit reluctantly" to use his words. He said all the juice
was in the beginning of the book and that the narrative "wound down." BUT, he called my writing
"superlative" and also said he thought another agent would pick it up as written. Two other agents
have requested the full and one, the first 50 pages.
I know the narrative does wind down but I'm not sure how to fix it (it's memoir/creative nonfiction).
And I hesitate to do so, given his comments that another agent may pick it up as is. What do you
think?