Ahoy-hoy! In preparation for yet another round in the query trenches, I'm looking to bolster my bio with that old sci-fi standby, the short story. To that end, I'm seeking feedback for two shorts, together totaling just under 18k words.
In exchange, I'll provide feedback for a full-length MS (what a savings!

). I'd prefer adult SF, but I'll do YA and Fantasy as well.
One further note: though there is no deadline, I'd prefer feedback ASAP because 1) I'd really like to start shopping these around to magazines and 2) come on, 18k.

Thanks in advance for any respondents, and have a great rest of the week...