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#pitmatch #ya #CR Steve, Amaya, and Kate all have feelings for one another, but will their friendship survive them? - 0 (0%)
#Pitmatch #YA #CR In one night, Steve, Amaya, and Kate must figure out if their feelings for each other are worth more than their friendship. - 8 (66.7%)
#pitmatch #YA #CR After years alone Steve has to face the music, and his feelings for his two best friends he’s kept hidden, even from himself. - 0 (0%)
#PitMatch #YA #CR Amaya is done with being the school slut. Her love for Kate is enough for her, if only she didn’t have feelings for Steve. - 4 (33.3%)
#PitMatch #YA #CR After dumping her controlling ex, Kate invites Steve and Amaya, to her party, unaware of the tangled feelings they share. - 0 (0%)
Total Voters: 10

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Author Topic: Pitchmatch - "What Happened At Kate's House"  (Read 10109 times)
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« on: February 10, 2016, 02:00:52 PM »

okay guys...  selected 5 out of my original batch of Pitmad pitches...   throw up a vote and let me know which one you think i should post up.

Just for laughs here's my tongue in cheek one that i actually did throw out during Pitmad once for the hell of it, that I'msure makes a lot of people roll their eyes:

#pitmad #YA #CR if Harry Potter was contemporary, "What Happened At Kate's House" is the love triangle JK wanted to write.
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« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2016, 03:09:31 PM »

I liked #2 the best
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« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2016, 04:30:19 PM »

I agree with Sarah -- go with #2.
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« Reply #3 on: February 10, 2016, 06:17:46 PM »

I voted for the second one.

Good luck!
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« Reply #4 on: February 10, 2016, 06:31:41 PM »

Def. number two!! Good Luck, Falthor!
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« Reply #5 on: February 10, 2016, 06:48:15 PM »

# 4, but with a suggestion for a change:

Amaya’s done with being the school slut. Her love for Kate is enough. Almost. There’s also their best friend, Steve.

Something about this story makes me think of Jean Paul Sartre's existentialist play, No Exit, though it probably plays out very differently from your book. Here's a link to the summary if you haven't read it.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/No_Exit
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« Reply #6 on: February 11, 2016, 08:40:59 AM »

That sounds like a really interesting play.  I've got my tweet up and scheduled.  now we just sit back and see what happens.
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« Reply #7 on: February 11, 2016, 12:48:06 PM »

GOOD LUCK!  cheer
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« Reply #8 on: May 27, 2016, 10:53:58 PM »

I liked number two, as well. Good luck!
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