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Author Topic: Owlhead Underground - Urban Fantasy  (Read 2171 times)
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« on: July 09, 2017, 11:51:04 PM »

Pitmad is coming, guys! Any help is appreciated.


Ghostly convict turned reluctant good guy agrees to an unlikely rescue for the chance to take revenge against the man responsible for his death: his brother.
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Eye right store ease.


« Reply #1 on: October 20, 2017, 02:50:57 AM »

Pitmad is coming, guys! Any help is appreciated.


Ghostly convict turned reluctant good guy agrees to an unlikely rescue for the chance to take revenge against the man responsible for his death: his brother.

I think it's too late for your contest, but in case you still need a pitch for another situation, I think this one could be shortened/clarified a bit.

A convict in a prison for ghosts seizes his chance to take revenge against the man responsible for his death: his brother.
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