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Opening Paragraph - TIME'S UP FOR FATHER TIME - cozy mystery
« on: March 07, 2019, 07:22:25 AM »
Genre: cozy mystery


       It was quite a scene in the ballroom of Maple Hill Inn, but I felt the need to escape the din and crowd of the party for a moment. The snow-covered ground, dusted trees, and bushes with white twinkle lights greeted me as I stepped onto the terrace. Closing my eyes, I inhaled deeply. “Peaceful,” I thought. Then I reflected on how far I’d come in rebuilding my life this past year. I gazed at the brilliant stars across the last December night and smiled. After several minutes, I took one more breath of crisp fresh air as the chill began to bite.


Thanks, Abi  :)
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