Author Topic: COLOSSA AND THE BIG KIDS--MG Superhero (For fun!)  (Read 256 times)

Offline dmdomosea

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COLOSSA AND THE BIG KIDS--MG Superhero (For fun!)
« on: July 19, 2019, 10:03:34 PM »
Posting this just for fun, as I loved reading through some of the others!

The giant beast tearing through the middle of town wasn’t Cora Bangs’ biggest problem. She’d faced this type of foe before and managed to drive it away without much trouble. This one, however, brought friends. Two of them, both furry and masked like their leader and each with an appetite as big as their bellies. So, Cora’s biggest problem wasn’t the racoons themselves but which of the beasts to tackle first.

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Re: COLOSSA AND THE BIG KIDS--MG Superhero (For fun!)
« Reply #1 on: August 03, 2019, 01:18:58 PM »
I like it! The last line does feel out of place though. I'm also not sure exactly how big to picture them. What does giant mean? Overall though, it piqued my interest!

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Re: COLOSSA AND THE BIG KIDS--MG Superhero (For fun!)
« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2019, 07:33:44 PM »

Thanks, Giller!