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THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
« on: July 29, 2019, 04:27:17 PM »
Any help would be appreciated.

When tragedy leaves top model Gertie von Hegstrom disfigured, she fears her life and career are over and any future romances are out of the question until she realizes Ollie has always loved her and accepts her as is.
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Re: THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
« Reply #1 on: July 29, 2019, 05:26:50 PM »
Just some tinkering (and a bit of license with "accident"):

When a freak motorcycle accident leaves top model Gertie von Hegstrom disfigured, she figures her career is kaput and her love life is history—until she realizes Ollie adores her no matter what.

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Re: THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2019, 09:11:27 AM »
Thanks, jcwrites. I like your spin on it.
NOOKS & GRANNIES - quirky paranormal
GATSBY DELANEY - 7TH GRADE IMPRESARIO - MG
THIS AIN'T NO COWBOY MOVIE -  YA
BROGWIN FRAYNEY AND HOW HE NEARLY SAVED A KINGDOM - MG
DEATH AT THE DRIVE-IN - Fiction - Published - available on Amazon
MOTORCYCLE BABIES - YA
A SCOUNDREL'S TALE - fiction

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Re: THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
« Reply #3 on: July 30, 2019, 12:23:36 PM »
Thanks, I—yikes!... Just noticed that "disfigured... figures" echo. Sorry!

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Re: THE LONG AND THE SHORT OF IT - Quirky Rom-Com
« Reply #4 on: July 30, 2019, 06:10:11 PM »
*That's* ok, jcwrites. I noticed and changed 'figures' to 'believes'.  :wink:
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GATSBY DELANEY - 7TH GRADE IMPRESARIO - MG
THIS AIN'T NO COWBOY MOVIE -  YA
BROGWIN FRAYNEY AND HOW HE NEARLY SAVED A KINGDOM - MG
DEATH AT THE DRIVE-IN - Fiction - Published - available on Amazon
MOTORCYCLE BABIES - YA
A SCOUNDREL'S TALE - fiction