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Offline boxofredpens

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Should I mention this in a query?
« on: August 07, 2020, 11:45:26 AM »
I participated in a contest where an editor read the first 20 pages of my manuscript, and after giving me his notes, he said to send him the revision. I’m wondering if that’s something I should mention in my query — he seemed interested in the manuscript and is at a high-profile publishing house, so it would be a great note to add, but maybe he was just being kind and wanted to offer more feedback?! Thank you so much for any advice!!!

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Re: Should I mention this in a query?
« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2020, 05:55:57 PM »
Assuming the editor still has it, that's something to mention during your phone call with the agent (or maybe when they make a request) but not in the query. eg, "I've attached the requested manuscript for Awesome Title. Just so you know, an editor at RandomPenguin has it after requesting it in a contest, and if he responds positively, I won't accept an offer before I've notified you."

Congrats, and good luck!

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Re: Should I mention this in a query?
« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2020, 02:34:59 PM »
Thank you so much, Tabris! I truly appreciate your advice - that's exactly what I'll do.

Good luck, too!