Author Topic: Pitch: Heirs of Ruin  (Read 242 times)

Offline astpierre

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Pitch: Heirs of Ruin
« on: June 01, 2021, 04:14:43 PM »
One sentence to encapsulate 90k words seems impossible, but here's what I have so far.  All insights are welcome and appreciated!

A mercenary, Ko, is one job away from obtaining a weapon powerful enough to destroy his homeland and the king who exiled him as a child, but to claim his vengeance he must first betray the thief he’s falling in love with.


Offline raktinope

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Re: Pitch: Heirs of Ruin
« Reply #1 on: June 01, 2021, 11:30:40 PM »
I'm intrigued. I'm not sure what this pitch is for, but if you have the words, I'd add how this thief is connected to the weapon.

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Re: Pitch: Heirs of Ruin
« Reply #2 on: June 02, 2021, 07:32:17 AM »
I like it. What about linking the thief with his last job?


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Re: Pitch: Heirs of Ruin
« Reply #3 on: June 02, 2021, 03:08:54 PM »
I'm intrigued! If it's for PitMad don't forget to include any relevant hashtags you'll need. I'm guessing this is adult fantasy??

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Re: Pitch: Heirs of Ruin
« Reply #4 on: June 02, 2021, 04:14:43 PM »
I think I am going to brave pitmad (and twitter)! It's new adult science fantasy so we'll see how it all goes.  Good luck to you!  If you want to trade RTs send me a PM with your handle and I'll add you to my list :)