Wanted: Beta Reader for First 5 Chapters (Women's Fiction)

[JBKDWriter]

I spent all weekend converting my first person present tense manuscript with substantial flashbacks to a third person past tense manuscript with the "two nows" structure.

Basically, I'm just wondering if it's working.  I'm looking for someone to read the first five chapters and just give general feedback on whether the "two nows" is working and if the manuscript is compelling in its new form.

I'll gladly return the favor and read chapters of yours.

You can private message me or  email me at kristi [at] itsaswingandamiss [dot] com if interested.

Thanks!!

[JayliaDarkness]

I don't write women's fiction, but I have read a lot in the genre.  I'm currently looking for someone to read the first 3 chapters of my YA Fantasy manuscript.  Interested?