Would someone be willing to...?

[D-is-an-author]

So I spent forever (it seems) writing this novel that my girlfriend continually encouraged me to finish. "It's good. Keep going. You've got something."
Now it's done. I think I must be on the seventh draft or something. But I'm finding I need someone who isn't me and who doesn't know me to give a fair critique of what I've got. Would any of you be willing?
I put the first two chapters in the first five pages forum. It's The Waiting Room. Anything you can offer on that post would be appreciated. And if you finish that excerpt and want to read more, maybe we could critique each other's writing? I've been told editing is one of my strengths.
Anyway, let me know.
All my best.
D

[KYcactus]

Hello, D. I looked in the First Five section and didn't see it. Can you post a link?

[D-is-an-author]

Hey there:
Thanks for responding to me, Cactus.
Yeah, it was up in the first five forum earlier, but I took it down because it has changed so much since that first post.
I'll repost it up there, so you can take a look, if you'd like.
Let me know what you think.
D