beta reader for my ya romance please

[Sheritha]

hi

Agent Scott Eagan was not impressed with my partial.  he said my ya voice was not strong enough and felt a bit forced.   Please help me.....

Email at sher.singhzn@gmail.com

Thanking you in advance....

Sher

[JLArmentrout]

That is a standard reply of his. Doesn't mean it couldn't hurt to have an extra eye take a peek, but keep in mind that is one his standard rejections

[Sheritha]

Hi JRo

Would you perhaps be willing to have a look at at the first three chapters?

Please let me know.

Sher

[Kimmy]

Here is what he said about my partial:

I felt the voice was a little too stereotypical for the audience.

He read my partial before I revised and made it more serious and darker in April. 

[JLArmentrout]

Hi JRo

Would you perhaps be willing to have a look at at the first three chapters?

Please let me know.

Sher

Sure. Check your email on here. I sent you my personal email address.