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Offline ClaireM

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Looking for crit swop for first 3 chapters.
« on: September 10, 2010, 06:57:12 AM »
Hi!

I'm finishing up editing my YA dystopia 'The Glimpse' at the moment and I'm considering dropping the first chapter and diving in with the second. I'd love to swop crits of the first 2-3 chapters with others to get some feedback on whether they think I should keep it or lose it?! I'm happy to offer feedback on most stuff especially YA.

Thanks,

Claire


'The Glimpse' Faber&Faber June 2012
'The Fall' Faber&Faber June 2013

Offline JLArmentrout

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Re: Looking for crit swop for first 3 chapters.
« Reply #1 on: September 10, 2010, 08:01:39 AM »

Hey check your email  ;D
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Re: Looking for crit swop for first 3 chapters.
« Reply #2 on: September 10, 2010, 07:52:59 PM »
I PM'ed u too!

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Re: Looking for crit swop for first 3 chapters.
« Reply #3 on: September 10, 2010, 10:54:44 PM »
you've got my email, lovely :)
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Re: Looking for crit swop for first 3 chapters.
« Reply #4 on: September 11, 2010, 07:27:40 AM »
Thanks! Have PMd/ emailed you all.  ;D
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Re: Looking for crit swop for first 3 chapters.
« Reply #5 on: November 23, 2010, 10:38:04 PM »
I recently changed a lot in the beginning of my YA Fantasy and would love a new set of eyes to see if it flows.  Want to swap first 3 chapters?

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Re: Looking for crit swop for first 3 chapters.
« Reply #6 on: December 02, 2010, 08:24:37 AM »
Hi Jaylia, I remember you had a few projects, which one are you working on now? been revising again and messing around with first three chapters, so yes, Id be interested in swopping. send me your first three and ill send you back; or PM me if you dont still have my email address!
'The Glimpse' Faber&Faber June 2012
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