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Offline lexcade

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need a short story critique........
« on: December 04, 2010, 07:27:15 PM »
working on a short story to submit to some online mags. it's supposed to be horror/suspense, but i think the bottom kind of drops out of it at the end. it has to stay below 5000 words. current count is 4966. any takers ;D
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Re: need a short story critique........
« Reply #1 on: December 05, 2010, 06:59:35 PM »
Send it to me in a PM and I'll give you my impression
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Re: need a short story critique........
« Reply #2 on: December 05, 2010, 07:23:30 PM »
thanks!!!
Duality - Edits
WIP: Spark
Outline: Untitled Epic Fantasy, Silver Circle (YA urban fantasy), Siren's Song (YA dystopian)
Back burner: Taming The Ancients

http://lexcade.blogspot.com