Critique Partner Wanted for 44 K Humorous Middle Grade

[mmmpancakes]

Hi All,

Would anyone be interested in swapping a MG book? Mine is 44 K and I'm finding the most trouble I have is with the first chapters (what the agent sees - hooray!). I'm a thorough and quick editor when it comes to punctuation, word use, grammar, etc., and I promise that if you swap me with something comparable, I can get back to you pretty soon with red lines and overall comments.

Let me know! Good luck everyone!

[JayliaDarkness]

I am looking for a new crit partner.  I've recently made a lot of adjustments to my story, and I want to make sure they all flow well.

My story is YA, though (a fantasy).  I have a bachelor's degree in elementary education and am currently subbing, so I read a lot of MG.  I'm very familiar with the work.  Although yours is MG and mine is YA, would you be interested in swapping?

[mmmpancakes]

Sure! Tell you what - my email is roark585@gmail.com if you want to shoot me an email.

I actually think I might need you to look at my MG fantasy project instead. Is that ok? I've had three full requests based on partials (so excited! and grateful!) and I don't want to mess this one up! The MG one is shorter - about 39,000 words.

Thanks!