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Offline brandileigh2003

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YA Contemporary Critique Wanted
« on: March 31, 2011, 02:22:38 PM »
I need an extra eye for places where I'm telling instead of showing, cliches, and places where characters sound too old. I've gotten reader's feedback as well as 3 chap critique from a pubbed author.
I'd be happy to swap ms. I read YA contemp and paranormal.
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