I am ready to send my revised MS to an R&R and I am not sure what is too much/too little info. Here is what I came up with:
Dear Wonderful Agent,
You will find attached the revised manuscript of my novel BORN TO DIE that you reviewed two months ago. Based on your comments, I increased the word count from 66,000 words to 85,000. I did not change much of the plot but added a lot more information and action into the Death Camps scenes as well as Axia's fight with her hybrid personality. I have not changed much of the first fifty pages but turned a lot of my previously passive scenes into active ones.
I hope you enjoy reading this version even more than the previous one.
Thank you very much for your time and patience.
Any thoughts?? Should I add more? Make it more suscint?