Send a Query to Lori Galvin at Aevitas Creative Management

View this agent's QueryTracker profile.

Thank you so much for querying me. I am looking forward to reading your work.

PLEASE NOTE: I update this MSWL occasionally. Updated 1/10

I am looking for excellent writing on a line level--where the writing is consistently of high quality throughout the manuscript--this doesn't necessarily mean the writing needs to be literary--I love commercial fiction too. I strongly encourage debut writers to work with beta readers, critique partners, writing workshops and so on to develop their writing as much as possible. Building a community with other writers will be invaluable to you.

Take advantage of all the excellent resources for writers out there, many with online access. Organizations and sites like AWP (Association of Writers and Writing Programs), WritersHelpingWriters.net, Loft Literary Center (with online classes), Grub St., or if you have a speciality like mysteries or thrillers check out Sisters in Crime, International Thriller Writers, Horror--HWA (Horror Writers of America) as well as podcasts and newsletters The Sh*t No One Tells You About Writing, Book Riot, The 5 a.m. Writers Club, The 7 a.m. Writers Club...just google.

The #1 mistake I see writers make is submitting their work to me too early and often it's because they've not received feedback from another (unbiased) reader. I expect to work with authors editorially (and enjoy the process) but I will do my best work if your manuscript is ready for me.

MSWL

• Crime Novels, Novels of Suspense or Obsession, Literary Mysteries like Liz Moore, Lisa Jewell, Mark Edwards, Jess Lourey, Will Dean, Catherine Ryan Howard, Kirstin Chen, Alyssa Cole, Jessica Knoll, Peter Swanson, PJ Vernon, Attica Locke, Diane Les Becquets, Amina Akhtar, Tim Johnston

• Supernatural thrillers or thrillers with a hint of (or some) horror such as books by Marcus Kliewer, Tracey Sierra, Simone St. James, Alex North

• Thrillers with erotic elements like those from Liane Moriarty, May Cobb, PJ Vernon, or my client Sebastian Plata.

• Book club novels that often provide the reader insight into the human condition or where we are as a society today. The story possesses emotional heft and often high stakes. Maybe this is a mystery/thriller crossover into another genre like women's fiction or contemporary fiction. Client Wanda M. Morris's novels fit into this category. Other examples (these authors are NOT clients) include Celeste Ng, Ashley Audrain, Laura Zigman, Tom Perrotta, Dennis Lehane, Rumaan Alam, Kiley Ried.

• NEW: Novels that reimagine a plot or premise--but made distinctive enough to stand on their own such as Mai Nguyen's Sunshine Nails or Moira MacDonald's Storybook Ending (May 2025) each kindred spirits to the Nora Ephron film You've Got Mail.

Optional: Sign in to QueryTracker

A QueryTracker account is NOT required to send a query. If you are not a member of QueryTracker, you can skip this step.

Signing into QueryTracker will link this query to your QueryTracker account, allowing it to be automatically tracked and displayed in QueryTracker for your convenience.
Not a QueryTracker member? Join here

Step 1: Tell us about the author

Fill in these author-related fields.










Have you ever been represented by a literary agent before?    
Have you previously published other books?    

Step 2: Tell us about the book

Fill in these book-related fields.

Genre: (required)
This agent is only seeking the genres shown in this list. If your book's genre is not shown here, please go to QueryTracker to find agents and publishers who are seeking your genre.
Query Letter:
The formatting will be converted to block paragraphs without indenting, in order to standardize on a format. Pasting large blocks of text can take several seconds.
Pro Tip: Make your query letter shine, get it critiqued for free at qtCritique.com
Synopsis:
The formatting will be converted to block paragraphs without indenting, in order to standardize on a format. Pasting large blocks of text can take several seconds.
Was any part of this book or query package created by A.I.?    
Is this book currently published or has it ever been published before?    
Upload the first 30 Pages of your book (or, if the book is nonfiction, include the full book proposal.):


Optional: Sign in to QueryTracker

A QueryTracker account is NOT required to send a query. If you are not a member of QueryTracker, you can skip this step.

Signing into QueryTracker will link this query to your QueryTracker account, allowing it to be automatically tracked and displayed in QueryTracker for your convenience.
Not a QueryTracker member? Join here

Final Step: Submit Your Query

Submit your query, or save a draft so you can come back and complete it later.

Important: After submitting your query, you will receive a personalized link to a special page that you can visit any time to check your query's status. If the agent would like to read more, they will contact you through that page as well as through email.
Query Draft Saved.

This form is powered by QueryManager, a service of QueryTracker. If you have any questions about this service, please Contact Us.

QueryTracker is a free service for authors to help them find literary agents and organize query letters. Learn more.