EQ 10/12/23 - Adult historical fantasy 105k
Full Request 12/11/23, sent same day
Form rejection 02/6/23
"After considering the whole manuscript, I've decided that I didn't connect with it enough to be able to champion it properly. Sadly, I must pass.
I'm really sorry. You are a talented writer; thank you for giving me the opportunity to read your work.
Best regards,"
Not sure that I appreciate a form response on a full, but onward and upward.

FQ: 10/28/2022
Full Request 12/11/2022
Request based to cut 40K words before submission. Hey, I'm thrilled she asked. She's not wrong that it probably needs a haircut.
Space opera 160K
Resubmitted at 96K. 12/20/22

Rejection 2/6/23 "You are a talented writer," "didn't connect enough to champion it properly."

I will be forever grateful to to her for making me seriously consider the length and pacing, at least.

Profile Update: Open to queries. Genres updated.

Profile Update: Closed to queries.

Submission date : 12/23/22

Rejection date: 01/03/23
Sci-Fi

"But let’s be clear: while your story isn’t right for me, someone else may say yes to your query soon. Keep at it!

I wish you all the best as you search for the perfect agent. Thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to read your work."

@pavlov if you read through the other comments that response is fairly standard. But I'm finding getting a response at all is getting rare, so this means she would have considered it at least I reckon.

polite form rejection @ 14 days

Anyone know if this is her form rejection or does the "liked the premise" line mean the query worked and she actually read my pages?

Thank you so much for your query.

While the premise for THE DARK CONSORT fits with what I'm looking for, after reading the sample I felt that I didn’t connect with the story enough to be able to champion it properly.

Unfortunately, I must pass.

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to take a look at your manuscript and best of luck as you move forward.

12/18/22 - Online form re: Brogwin - MG - 75K. Auto-responses for receipt ofform & 1st 3 chapters. She seems so nice. Would really like to work with her.
12/19/22 - form rejection

Profile Update: Genres updated.

Form Query: 9/23/22
Form Rejection: 12/12/22
Adult Fantasy 85k

Thank you for your patience as I make my way through queries.
I’ve had some time to consider ______ and have ultimately decided to pass. I’m afraid that I didn’t feel a strong enough connection to the story.
I know that this is disappointing.
But let’s be clear, while your story isn’t right for me, someone else may say yes to your query soon. Keep at it!
I wish you all the best and strength as you search for the perfect agent. Thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to read your work.

Good luck with that haircut! 40K sounds daunting!

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Form Query: 11/3/2022
Nudge with Offer: 11/21/2022
Full Request 11/21/2022
Personalized Rejection 11/29/2022

109K Adult Speculative

Form Query: 5/9
Full Request: 6/6
Sent same day
Impersonal form rejection: 10/5

Adult Thriller w/Horror Elements 92k

Profile Update: Genres updated.