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Mr. Moses Cardona

John Hawkins & Associates, Inc.

80 Maiden Lane, Suite 1503

New York, NY 10038

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from KristenH
Apr 11, 2017 4:14 pm

Eq 3/7/17 (Diplomatic Immunity)
ER 4.11.17 (Passed from nudge--not a good fit.) Will requery Williiam Reiss with Venom next month.
from JJProbe
Feb 15, 2017 5:06 pm

EQ: 2/15/17
ER: 2/15/17
102K Thriller
Very fast...not my record, but only about 5 hours to reject...certainly didn't leave me hanging! Form letter, though very nice --

Many thanks for your note. This material doesn't seem quite right for me, but I'm sure other agents will feel differently. I wish you the best of luck elsewhere and many thanks again for the opportunity to read your work.

Yours sincerely,

from Patrick (admin)
Dec 06, 2016 11:08 am

Profile Update: New postal address.

from QLukeDotCom
Aug 10, 2016 4:09 pm

Cardona was my second rejection of the day. A shame because I really was impressed with some of his agency's work and am hoping to find someone with experience with writers of color.

Lovers and Fighters
Fantasy, 97k
from KristenH
Apr 25, 2016 4:11 pm

On 3/23/16, I've requeried Moses with Chain Reaction. Today I've nudged him and heard back--I was on hold before he went on London Book Fair. But he decided to pass, since he's stacked with queries and doesn't have the time to look at it again. He wished me luck with it and mentioned Thrillerfest, which is something I can't afford. So I'll retry Anne with Chain Reaction later in May.
from MattOConnor
Apr 19, 2016 11:45 am

Form letter "While this appears to be a strong project, I'm afraid it doesn't strike me as a likely fit with me..."
from Rohink
Apr 01, 2016 6:25 pm

Got back to me the same day I sent it. It was a rejection saying my project was strong but it didn't fit with his other contracts
from GretchenStone
Feb 15, 2016 9:45 am

Sent query 11/30 with 3 chapter attached. So far he is only agent I've found who accepts attachments.

Nudged him and he replied that my sub is n his TBR file. Happy Dance

70,000 words
Upmarket women's fiction
from Catsamoa79
Feb 12, 2016 1:34 pm

EQ: 2/12/16
ER: 2/12//16 (4 hours later!)
Very impersonal form letter.
from KristenH
Jan 22, 2016 4:05 pm

On 1/20/16, I've requeried Moses Carbona with Venom. Today I've heard back from him--he passed, not a good for him. I'll try him in Mach with Chain Reaction's requery.
from Jimsladack
Oct 22, 2015 2:50 pm

Replied same day to a query with a polite rejection.
from anotherearth
Oct 15, 2015 12:14 pm

EQ: 10.14
ER: 10.14 Literary

Dear (my name)

Thank you for your recent query but this does not seem right for me so I'm going to respectfully pass on looking at more material. Best of success with the project.
from cyrusnew
Sep 18, 2015 2:42 pm

EQ 9/15/15

ER 9/18/15-Form letter rejection, but at least he put my name on the letter unlike most agents.
from ardnaxela28
Jun 17, 2015 2:15 pm

EQ 5/11
ER 6/17
from sunflowersky
Apr 12, 2015 4:27 am

EQ: 12/22/14
Nudge: 2/1/15

Got a personal response the next day saying he is still working on submissions from late December and he hopes to get to my query over the weekend and see if he wants to read more.

As a previous author said, lucky clients! (Hope I get to be one!)

Another nudge: 3/31: "I really appreciated your prompt and considerate response. I still haven't heard from you, however. Did it get lost in the shuffle, or should I assume it's a pass?"

4/12: Closing this out.

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