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Ms. Jill Marsal

Marsal Lyon Literary Agency, LLC

PMB 121, 665 San Rodolfo Dr. 124

Solana Beach, CA 92075

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Twitter: jillmarsal

AAR Member: No

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Snail-Mail: No

E-Mail: Yes

Online Form: No

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from evan11
Nov 17, 2016 7:36 pm

EQ: – 11/10
PR: 11/12
ER – 11/17 (form)

Upmarket Women's
from LBasher7
Nov 17, 2016 10:27 am

EQ: 11/10
PR: First 50 pages, 11/12
ER: 11/17 Jill was very nice, and offered a brief explanation of why she didn't request more. (Genre is saturated, hard to break into)

Adult Thriller 75k words
from KayBeyus
Oct 31, 2016 6:21 pm

EQ: 10/27
ER: 10/31 Wondering if it's time to give my query a face lift...
from laurenh
Oct 20, 2016 10:02 am

EQ: 10/18/16
ER: 10/20 form
from doofus1968
Oct 18, 2016 6:27 am

EQ: 10/13/16
PR: 10/14/16 requested first 50 pages
ER: 10/17/16 very nice rejection letter

Thank you for sending me a portion of your manuscript. I enjoyed reading it.

While your pages are interesting and well-written, I was concerned about the paranormal elemetns and also having them not feel too “device-like.”

I wish you the best in finding the right agent who can successfully champion your project.

Paranormal Mystery 69K
from JJProbe
Sep 20, 2016 12:17 pm

EQ: 9/18
ER: 9/20
107K Thriller

Form letter rejection, but quick is better than the lingering death of "no response means no":

Thank you for your email. While your project sounds interesting, I don’t think it is right for my list at this time.

I appreciate your querying us and wish you good luck in finding the right agent who can successfully champion your work.


Jill Marsal
Marsal Lyon Literary Agency
from awkwordly
Sep 08, 2016 11:06 am

EQ: 9/7
ER: 9/8
At least she was prompt!
from imposter
Aug 17, 2016 7:34 am

EQ: 8/14/16
ER: 8/16/16 (Interesting premise, not right for her list)
YA Mystery/Suspense, 88k
from KristenH
Aug 02, 2016 6:56 am

EQ 7/29/16 (Requery Venom)
ER 8/1/16 (Interesting premise, not right project.) Will try her next month with Chain Reaction.
from saw2016
Jul 15, 2016 10:47 am

Responded to my query within 2 days with a ER form response. (non fiction humour).
from Catsamoa79
Jun 24, 2016 4:22 pm

EQ: 6/22/16
ER: 6/24/16
Form letter
from lavlavlav
Jun 01, 2016 5:36 pm

eq : 18 may
partial request 21 may
70k book club fiction /LITFIC
pass : 6/1
from RichWriter4
May 24, 2016 12:14 pm

EQ: 5/22/2016 55k memoir
ER: 5/24/2016
from dlawton
May 12, 2016 5:27 am

EQ: 5/3
Partial request (50 pages): 5/4
Rejection: 5/11

87k, crime suspense thriller
from huggsngiggles
May 09, 2016 7:19 pm

EQ: 5/8
ER: 5/9

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