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Success Story Interview - Kendall Ring

An Interview with Kendall Ring (kendallring on QT) upon receiving an offer of representation from agent Tara Wynne of Curtis Brown, Australia.

11/09/2026

QT: Can you tell us a little bit about the book for which you've found representation? What inspired you to write it?
Kendall Ring:
It's about a group of women on a hens weekend who wake up on a private island with no memory of how they arrived, and they learn the only way off the island is to hunt or be hunted. My husband and I were watching a Netflix show earlier this year and one of the contestants on this reality show about survival said something along the lines of, "It's almost like we are being hunted" and it gave me the (terrifying) idea of what if people paid for an experience to go hunt other people.
QT: How long have you been writing?
Kendall Ring:
Since I was a little girl. I'd come home from school and write stories for fun.
QT: How long have you been working on this book?
Kendall Ring:
I started writing it in late June and finished it in early September.
QT: Was there ever a time you felt like giving up, and what helped you to stay on course?
Kendall Ring:
Not giving up per se, but there were times when I struggled to find the time to write and I worried I'd lose my momentum and the project would derail. I'm a mum and work full time, so writing has to be worked in around those things.
QT: Is this your first book?
Kendall Ring:
It's the first book I've seriously queried but not the first book I've written.
QT: Do you have any formal writing training?
Kendall Ring:
Other than spending four years at uni, no.
QT: Do you follow a writing routine or schedule?
Kendall Ring:
No. It fits in when it fits in - whether that's a quick ten minutes at night or a full four hours in between clients.
QT: How many times did you re-write/edit your book?
Kendall Ring:
I did some light edits before querying and then mid-querying journey an agent asked me to add 20,000 words to my manuscript, so I did that.
QT: Did you have beta readers for your book?
Kendall Ring:
A couple.
QT: Did you outline your book, or do you write from the hip?
Kendall Ring:
Brief outline of beginning, end, and major plot points. Otherwise always writing from the hip.
QT: How long have you been querying for this book? Other books?
Kendall Ring:
Began querying September 12th and signed with an agent on November 4th.
QT: About how many query letters did you send out for this book?
Kendall Ring:
64.
QT: On what criteria did you select the agents you queried?
Kendall Ring:
I tried to find out as much information about each agent as I could. It took ages, but I didn't want to query someone who I didn't think would potentially be a good fit.
QT: Did you tailor each query to the specific agent, and if so, how?
Kendall Ring:
I didn't tailor my queries to each agent (other than making sure I addressed them by the correct name, obviously!), but I took a long time sending each query out to make sure it was going to the agent at that agency who I thought it stood the best chance with.
QT: What advice would you give other writers seeking agents?
Kendall Ring:
Don't give up. Querying sucks. You're putting something precious to you out in the world to be rejected over and over again and it never hurts less. But every no is one step closer to a yes.

Query Letter:

Dear [AGENT],

Haley and her hens crew are ready for the ultimate pre-wedding weekend in Sydney; what they didn’t expect was waking up in a villa on a private island with no memory of how they got there, and why they have been told the only way off the island is to hunt or be hunted.

HENS is a 79,000 word contemporary thriller, riddled with twists, an undercurrent of spice, and blurring the lines between reality and the not-so-distant future of AI. Perfect for readers who enjoyed the pacing and the thrill of None of This Is True by Lisa Jewell and the twists of Daisy Darker by Alice Feeney.

It’s Haley’s hens weekend. Darling Harbour is sparkling, the sun is bright, the mimosas endless, the yacht is stunning. But when Haley wakes up from a sun soaked, Moet-drenched nap, she has no idea where she is. Or how she got there.

Their own private island, with a classically handsome butler, a breathtaking villa, endless food and drink, all just for the four of them for five whole nights! Harry must have organised this, must be surprising her.

But when the evening gets out of hand on the first night at the villa, the women learn what this really is — a hunt. And the only way off the island is to track down their targets and kill them. As resources dwindle and panic sets in, the women learn that not only are they hunting, but they are being hunted. And time is running out.

I moved with my husband from the US to Australia seven years ago on an adventurous whim. I earned my BA in Cultural and Linguistic Anthropology – basically the study of why people people (if you will) and why people speak and say the things they do. I spend my time running my own small business, training and coaching women, but have always managed to find time to write. I have yet to seek any publishing avenue until this most recent project, but I have assisted with ghost writing for US author Conrad Wesselhoeft in one of his upcoming novels. Brought to life by a semi-philosophical and ethical conversation between my husband and I over a bottle of Malbec, HENS was born.